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5. Revise & Proofread

It is important to proofread your writing after you revise it. Look for errors in grammar and spelling.

6. Publish

It is important to review your writing one more time before you publish it.

 

Bananas and Apples           Grace Rhee<양남초1>

  Pretty bananas and pretty apples are both delicious fruit.

They taste very good. They can be green. We eat them. They grow on tall trees. Apples are red, but bananas are yellow. Apples are round, but bananas are long. They are from different places. We peel apples and we peel bananas. We buy them at the market.

Lions and Tigers

Mark Kim<신당초1>

  Lions and tigers go around at night. They don't sleep in winter.

They both catch other animals for food.

They are so fast. They hide in grass and wait in the grass for an animal.

They are both cats, but tigers are bigger than lions. Lions live with others, but tigers live alone. They both live in the jungles. Lions have a mane, but tigers don't have mane. Tigers have stripes, but lions don't have stripes.

Tigers live in places with lots of trees and grass. A lion livers in a field.

Lions live in Africa, but tigers live in Asia. The lion is the king of the animals.